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EQUILATERAL by Ken Kalfus reviewed by Chris Ludovici

Cleaver Magazine Posted on June 8, 2013 by thwackJuly 13, 2020

Equilateral cover art. A picture of a woman with thick brown hair against a blue-green sky and over a red desert

EQUILATERAL
by Ken Kalfus
Bloomsbury USA, 224 pages

Reviewed by Chris Ludovici

At its core, Ken Kalfus’s Equilateral is about communication: communication between an empire and its subjects; between visionaries and those who finance that vision; between the people who plan a task and those who realize it. And— most essentially to plot while least essentially to the narrative— Equilateral is about communication between the planets Earth and Mars. In a little over two hundred pages, Kalfus manages to tell a rich, fascinating story about our need to connect with something outside of ourselves, and our inherent limitations that keep us from doing just that.

The discovery of canals on the surface of Mars has led the nineteenth century scientific community to conclude that there is indeed intelligent life on our closest celestial neighbor, setting in motion a mad scramble to be the first culture to make contact with it. In Egypt, British astronomer Sanford Thayer is nearing completion of his Equilateral, a gigantic equilateral triangle, each side five feet deep and more than three hundred miles long, dug in the dessert that, once completed, will be filled with pitch and set on fire, creating a “space flare” so large it will be visible to the sure-to-be-there Martian astronomers gazing at the Earth through telescopes of their own.

Thayer is working under a tight deadline. Years of planning and construction will have been for nothing if the Equilateral isn’t complete by June 17th 1894, the day Earth is most clearly visible to Mars for several years. Thayer, with the help of his trusted assistant Miss Kennedy and a native Egyptian servant girl known only as Bint, does all he can to ensure the success of the Equilateral in the face of mounting setbacks.

Kalfus’s theme of communication and its inherent limitations emerges through these setbacks and the responses by Thayer and his crew. A good and honorable man, Thayer believes that his Equilateral, as an unmistakably logically pure mathematical expression, will signal to Earth’s neighbors that it is populated with reasonable creatures worthy of attention. Rational and scientific to a fault, he has embraced not just the purity of mathematics but of Darwin’s theory of evolution, as well. He believes unquestioningly that the Martian civilization is older and therefore more evolved and enlightened than our own. Thayer is desperate to reach out and contact the Martians, to talk to and learn from what he is sure is a race of beings that will do nothing but improve the human experience.

But his mission to communicate with the Martians is at constant risk due to his inability and unwillingness to communicate effectively with “savages” marshaled to go about the business of building his great Equilateral. Noble Thayer’s intentions are, he’s still a 19th century Englishman, susceptible to the rampant misogyny, racism, and imperialism of his time. He believes in the inherent superiority of the white English way, and the duty of all other races to fall in line and do what’s necessary to further his naturally superior goals.

In Equilateral, success or failure rests again and again on the ability for the characters to understand and work with one another. From the massive Equilateral project itself— to the equally massive fundraising required to keep it running, to the much smaller romantic triangle between Thayer, Miss. Kennedy, and Bint.

Equilateral is a morally complicated story told with grace and clarity. There’s a lot going on but it never feels overwhelming or confusing. Kalfus’s prose is elegant; his characters, sharply realized and sympathetic. The novel is smart enough to ask big questions, and smart enough to not definitively answer them. The plot, while simple, has drive and purpose. It’s hard not to get swept up in the narrative drive and optimism, misguided though it is, about the potential contact with the Martians. Reading it, I knew rationally that there was no life on Mars and that Thayer’s quest was doomed to failure, but there was another less logical part of me that was holding out hope.

With Equilateral, Ken Kalfus has managed to produce a two hundred page epic, and a taut page turner out of a quest doomed to failure. An impressive accomplishment.

–June 8, 2013


Chris Ludovici author photoChris Ludovici has published articles in The Princeton Packet and online at Cinedelphia. His fiction has appeared in several literary magazines, and in 2009 he won the Judith Stark awards in fiction and drama. He has completed three novels, two on his own and one with his wife Desi whom he lives with along with their son Sam and too many cats in Drexel Hill.

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MY BEAUTIFUL BUS by Jacques Jouet, translated by Eric Lamb reviewed by Michelle Fost

Cleaver Magazine Posted on May 14, 2013 by thwackJuly 13, 2020

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MY BEAUTIFUL BUS
by Jacques Jouet, translated by Eric Lamb
Dalkey Archive Press, 130 pages.

reviewed by Michelle Fost

Jacques Jouet’s My Beautiful Bus reminded me of an observation by a former teacher of mine, playwright Romulus Linney. In 2011, a good friend, whom I’d first met many years ago in Linney’s class at the University of Pennsylvania, e-mailed me with the sad news of his death. In his obituary, the New York Times quoted Linney, “My writing will add up to the sum total of me. The choices I make with my writing have a lot to do with myself as an unfolding personality, so that in the end your writing is really your destiny.”

Linney was an influential teacher for us young aspiring writers, always telling us to “go deeper” with our writing. Even after death, his words stopped me in my tracks.

span style=”font-family: ‘times new roman’, times; font-size: medium;”>Reading My Beautiful Bus, I found myself thinking about how a writer creates not just the worlds inside, say, plays and novels, but also—in the act of writing, in the choices of what to think about and attend to and notice, and so on—the world as the writer sees it, the writer’s life. What I appreciated about My Beautiful Bus is the great fun and, yes, beauty, that emerges from a story of a road trip that we can read at once as a fictional romp and a meditation on writing and living.

The beauty here is often in the strangeness of the details. For example, the bus drives past a saw-mill with a fire in its courtyard: “Even the smoke flows in the same direction as my beautiful bus.” And consider this lovely and surprising description of the sky: “The skies are immense. Who says you don’t see any scenery on the toll road? You see skies that are even vaster because they’ve been underlined by the road.”

Jouet is successful in getting us to think about how living, like writing and like driving, is a creative act—full of rules, routes, routines, repetitions, and patterns but not predetermined. What matters here is that there is always room for chance, for accidents, for people behaving unpredictably and for the unexpected to take place. One character asks, “What will I see? Memorable things? Uncountable things?” Another answers, “No, countable things, things that you aren’t prepared for.”

I liked watching Jouet lingering in the places his characters got to, taking his time to look around and find what interests him. Equally satisfying was his ability to compress time, to speed up the story when it suits him.

Jouet has been a member of Oulipo—the Workshop for Potential Literature—since 1983. Raymond Queneau, Georges Perec, and Italo Calvino are some of the well-known members. The aesthetic of the group recognizes that the world is full of constraints, and that artists can use constraints to unlock creative potential. So, Jouet writes in Bus: “In Beaumont, we drank wine from Châteauneuf and talked with a motorcyclist, well into his fifties, who was attempting a Tour de France along a predetermined circuit—another organized trip—one that roughly draws the shape of a big heart on a road map.” Even when a route is planned, there is room for a big heart.


 

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Michelle Fost is a writer living in Toronto. Her fiction has appeared in Geist Magazine and The Painted Bride Quarterly. Her book reviews have appeared in The New York Times Book Review, The Philadelphia Inquirer, and The Boston Phoenix Literary Section.

 

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