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INHOSPITABLE by Virginia Eggerton

INHOSPITABLE by Virginia Eggerton

Capitalized "Scrabble" on second reference (themed Scrabble).

There was an extra space between the July and August paragraphs, inconsistent with how other changes in date were treated, so I deleted the extra space.

 

STINGRAY by John Cullen

STINGRAY by John Cullen

John CullenSTINGRAY My sister and I recall that old Stingray while we sit a vigil in the critical care unit. She melts into the vinyl cushions and I lean sideways, balanced like a circus acrobat one moment before falling. My…

LEFTOVERS by Regan Puckett

LEFTOVERS by Regan Puckett

Regan PuckettLEFTOVERS I almost had a husband once, but we never made it to the wedding. Now, he’s someone else’s husband, with a baby announcement on Facebook and a house two towns over. Our last date, we went to an…

OUR FATHERS by Sarah Freligh

OUR FATHERS by Sarah Freligh

Sarah FrelighOUR FATHERS Our fathers rise at five and whistle out the door carrying thermoses of black coffee and lunches our mothers have packed for them—bags of corn chips that fat up the blood and sandwiches made of meat and…

MONOCULAR by Tingyu Liu

MONOCULAR by Tingyu Liu

Tingyu LiuMONOCULAR Remembering, still: Sunday egg scrambles, green …………..peppers and sharp cheddar adorning …………..our fingers, coffee pot chuckling. Tilt and: our slip of a room …………..in Havana, stumbling on the party downstairs, sweet …………..cake kiss, warm cola in colored cups.…

SILVER FALLS by Melody Wilson

SILVER FALLS by Melody Wilson

Melody WilsonSILVER FALLS We have driven east this bright afternoon, the two of us, young parents on a break from entropy. I am drowning in something I can’t define and the day reels out like un-spliced frames of someone else’s…

THE OREGON TRAIL by Mike Itaya

THE OREGON TRAIL by Mike Itaya

Mike ItayaTHE OREGON TRAIL 1884 Today I am eleven years born! We McClelland Family, Pa, Ma, Sis, and me (plus Joseph, our Mormon frontier scout), strike out from Independence, Missouri. The Oregon Trail is bright before us, our ox-pulled Conestoga…

BIOLUMINESCENCE by Sara Mae

BIOLUMINESCENCE by Sara Mae

Sara MaeBIOLUMINESCENCE The pregnancy scare skulks through bay grasses. It tips us over like cows & drains our peach liqueur. Flashlights under the bleachers illuminating grope & teen & tooth & wick, a stick rattling the jellyfish to yield shine.…

SURVIVOR GUILT by Melody Wilson

SURVIVOR GUILT by Melody Wilson

Melody WilsonSURVIVOR GUILT My sister slept in the laundry room, the door fastened by a cinch strap and a nail. She painted the cinderblock walls purple. Some nights tires would slide into the gravel drive and it was my job…

FLOUNDER by Tom Laichas

FLOUNDER by Tom Laichas

Tom LaichasFLOUNDER i The fingertips know things. Their ridged whorls …. confess… the … whole.. body’s whereabouts. The fingernails know things too, and knew them even before the teeth. ii The left hand arrives like a visitant, held one arm’s length…

MODERNA by Nikolaj Volgushev

MODERNA by Nikolaj Volgushev

Nikolaj VolgushevMODERNA My shoulder hurt a lot after the second dose and the following morning I found a thorny vine had sprouted from beneath the Band-Aid. It clambered down my upper arm in an emerald coil. I drove back to…

NIGHTS WHEN I’M TIRED by Peter Amos

NIGHTS WHEN I’M TIRED by Peter Amos

Peter AmosNIGHTS WHEN I’M TIRED Mom fell asleep around Labor Day that year and the slumber was deep. Dad bagged the recycling, drove to school on weekdays, spread his papers across the living room floor in the afternoons, and asked…

THOUSAND-WATT SMILE by Kathryn Silver-Hajo

Kathryn Silver-HajoTHOUSAND-WATT SMILE Sara nearly dropped the peeling tin box of Grandpa Teddy’s things when she pulled out the yellowed, cracked black and white of Grandma Bea sitting on the wheel hub of their ‘38 Chevy, chubby ankles crossed. Sara…

THANKSGIVING BIRD by Suman Mallick

THANKSGIVING BIRD by Suman Mallick

In the first sentence, "Jay, his stepfather—who was nice enough, if not a little too subservient"--does it seem like the 'not' isn't needed? In other words, the meaning is that Jay IS a little too subservient, so it should say "nice enough, if a little too subservient." Should we query the author on this?

LAB RAT VENGEANCE by Sarah Schiff

Sarah SchiffLAB RAT VENGEANCE In the neuroscience lab where I worked as an undergraduate intern, we were studying what makes mice experience the sensation of fullness. You can just imagine who’d want access to those findings—the know-how to regulate people’s…

NAMED by Alex Juffer

In the 1st section, 3rd sentence: "In fact, I would have swung for the gut, stole his air so he had to collapse into me." --Grammatically, this should be "stolen," but the author may have chosen the more colloquial "stole." Query?

Also in the 1st section, 4th paragraph, I fixed the em dash to make it consistent.

In the last section, first paragraph, I'm having second thoughts about this line: "with a first name and last initial like a partial staking. An object, a tool, more stamp than identity."

Staking or stalking? I think "staking," as in a claim, but want to make sure.

 

AN UNFULFILLED DREAM by Anika Pavel

AN UNFULFILLED DREAM by Anika Pavel

Anika PavelAN UNFULFILLED DREAM Through the COVID-19 lockdown in spring 2020, people were buying everything in sight. During a visit to my local supermarket, the empty shelves were familiar. In my youth, in communist Czechoslovakia, empty shelves were a norm,…

cleave. by Courtney Elizabeth Young

cleave. by Courtney Elizabeth Young

Courtney Elizabeth Youngcleave. Here are the ways I have heard it happens: in bed, waking to wheezing, breathing in loose clumps lining your pillow. Out with friends, falling into your Cobb salad, your Pinot. In the pool, raking waters in…

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